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Interesting

I liked it.

For my ears, the captain's voice is a little muffled and maybe the pace is a little slow. However, I liked the story, the gags, the character and the animation. If I had to guess, I'd say you'd come across a magazine called "Viz" once or twice.

I look forward to the next episode.

Roberto

madwalrus responds:

Haha yes, Viz is brilliant and has been a big influence on my work. This idea actually started as a comic strip which I sent to them.
Thanks for the feedback.

Good Work

As with any of my free advice, it's usually worth what you pay for it. However, I liked this. The story is a great concept and I thought the action and the score were combined in an effective way. There could be advantages in making it much shorter, for one thing, it would give you more time to iron out the technical issues you are having with Flash. Another thing you may want to do is to develop the characters more by adding details to their faces. For example, giving the puppy eyes with moving pupils would allow you to create a character that is more alive without adding greatly to the animation workload.

I look forward to the next one.

Roberto

XQchris responds:

thanks ill defenetly will try doing that on my next flash :3

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